This lesson will... prepare you to ask for feedback, help you brainstorm more content and revise your essay.
By the end you should... be able to implement feedback, have a game plan for revision, and have a solid draft under your belt.
College Essay Essentials: paperback: page 103-182      |     ebook: pages 100-187

So you’ve written your first draft. (And if you haven’t, click here.)

What now?

  1. Go here for tips on revising your essay.
  2. Show it to a trusted teacher or friend. Or parent. But if this makes you nervous, check out this post on “How Your Parents Can Help You Write Your College Essay–and Why Your Mom or Dad May Not Be Your Best Editor.”
  3. Work with the College Essay Guy.

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