two things you should know about our team:
1. More than 80% of the undergraduate students we work with gain acceptance into one of their top choice schools, and 98% of those students who have applied to the Top 50 schools have been accepted.
2. But we don't base our success solely on our students' college acceptances.
Why? Because there are so many other things that our students have done well (Undergraduate GPA, scores, Extracurriculars, Life) before meeting us that have prepared them to write a great personal statement. Instead:
We measure our success in other ways...
Each time a student tells us that working with us has made him a better writer
Each time a student tells us we've helped her gain confidence
Or when we receive a testimonial like this:
That's how we know we've made a real impact. And that's why we love our work.
But we also don’t mind bragging a little. And, because you are sometimes curious, we’ve compiled a list of some of our recent acceptances:
American University, Washington College of Law
American University, Graduate School of International Service
Boston College
Boston University
Brown University
California Polytechnic State University, San Luis Obispo
Carnegie Mellon University
Cambridge University (England)
Case Western Reserve University
Chapman University
University of Chicago, Graduate Program, Center for Middle Eastern Studies
College of Charleston
University of Colorado, Boulder
Columbia University, Graduate Program, Middle Eastern Studies
Columbia University, Teacher’s College, Graduate Program, Psychology
Cornell University
Drexel University, Thomas R. Kline School of Law
Duke University
Emory University
Georgetown University
Georgetown University, Graduate Program, Center for Contemporary Arab Studies
George Mason University
George Washington University
Georgia Institute of Technology
Harvard College
Harvard University, Graduate Program, Center for Middle Eastern Studies
Johns Hopkins University
Juniata College
Loyola University Chicago School of Law
University of Maryland, College Park
Massachusetts Institute of Technology
University of Michigan, Ann Arbor
New York University
Northeastern University
University of North Carolina, Chapel Hill
Northwestern University
Oberlin College
Occidental College
Ohio State University
University of Pennsylvania
Pratt Institute
Princeton University
Rice University
University of Richmond
University of San Francisco
University of Santa Clara
Scripps College
Seton Hall University
Seton Hall University School of Law
University of Southern California
Southern Methodist University
St. John’s University
St. Louis University School of Law
Stanford University
Stevens Institute of Technology
Syracuse University
University of Texas, Austin
Tufts University
Tulane University School of Law
Vanderbilt University
University of Virginia
Wake Forest University
Washington University in St. Louis
University of Washington
College of William and Mary
University of Wisconsin, Madison
Yale University
...and dozens of other great institutions.
MEET THE TEAM
Ethan Sawyer is an internationally recognized college essay expert and sought-after speaker.
Each year he helps thousands of students and counselors through his online courses, workshops, articles, books, and products. His book, College Essay Essentials, is currently the #1 best-selling book on college essays worldwide.
A graduate of Northwestern University, Ethan holds an MFA from UC Irvine and two counseling certificates. He lives in Los Angeles with his beautiful wife, Veronica, and their amazing daughter, Zola.
Christine (she/her) is a former professor (Mills College, Macalester College, and UC-Davis) and high school English teacher who has also been an independent college and graduate school admissions consultant for 20+ years. She is passionate about helping high school students find and narrate what makes them tick, no matter how bizarre or how traditional. Students she has coached on the personal essay have been accepted to every single Ivy, Seven Sister, and top 10 liberal arts college & university in the U.S. (although she maintains a strong critique of the rankings system). Born in Miami to parents from Tennessee and Mississippi, Christine was the first in the family to cross the Mason Dixon line for college. She graduated Phi Beta Kappa from Smith College with a BA in English and completed her MA at the University of Toronto, and taught English lit in a prep school in Coconut Grove. Realizing that a university setting might be a better match, she completed her PhD in the interdisciplinary History of Consciousness Board at the University of California/Santa Cruz. Her extracurricular activities include cats, 1920s culture, turning simple dinner plans into ridiculously complicated 8-course gourmet feasts that require buying entirely unnecessary kitchen gadgets, and more cats. She splits her time between Miami Beach and Berlin.
Comprehensive Packages
1-SCHOOL
Complete Package
$5,500
3 SCHOOL
Complete package
$8,250
6-SCHOOL Complete Package
$10,500
The above packages above include support on the Statement of Purpose, resume/cv, and up to 1000 words of supplemental essay writing requirements per program, beyond the Statement of Purpose. These packages also include help with building your list, managing deadlines, keeping track of the different programs and requirements, and soliciting letters of recommendation. If applicable, we also include interview preparation and a mock interview (if relevant). Additional fees may apply for more extensive supplemental essay requirements.
À la carte Consulting Services
Statement of purpose
$4,000
The Statement of Purpose is your prime opportunity to make an impression on the admissions committee. It is critical to narrate a compelling story that makes it seem inevitable that your next step in life is this particular degree at this particular school. In this package, we provide support on:
Foregrounding your academic strengths
Researching the department and professors
Researching programs, centers, institutes, archives, and labs
Brainstorming how to make your story and theirs come together
Outlining, Drafting, Revising, and Polishing
Along the way, we offer time-saving tips and information about common pitfalls to avoid. We teach you how to think like one of the professors or committee members who might be reading your application.
What’s included: This service includes up to 12 hours of coach support through a strategic planning session, Zoom consultations, document development, drafting, and revisions by a graduate essay expert knowledgeable in your field.
School-specific supplemental essays
$1,000
Many degrees require an additional essay or two. This service includes a planning session designed to highlight your accomplishments, skills, and experiences without repeating material from your primary essay.
Example supplemental essays may include diversity statements, policy analysis, pedagogical philosophy, optional supplemental essays, and others specific to the degree program you are targeting.
We walk you through the brainstorming, outlining, drafting, and revising process and ensures your essays are packed with powerful anecdotes, examples, and images that reinforce your strength as a candidate. If you are required to produce a specific kind of statement (e.g., pedagogical philosophy, policy analysis), we’ll teach you about that genre and guarantee your piece meets professional standards.
What’s included: This service includes two face-to-face meetings and two complete rounds of revision with detailed commentary by your essay coach.
Other Consulting Services
Program List Building: $1500
We provide help to candidates who need assistance in determining the best programs and universities to apply to. We start by providing you with templates to organize the daunting amount of information to keep track of. We then show you how to proceed in three phases: the broad search, the comparative stage, and the deep dive exploration.
Resume
$1000
Everyone struggles with their resume. If you are still in college or recently graduated, you might feel like you don’t have enough information. If you are returning to school after being in the workforce, which parts of your jobs should you highlight and how to narrow your experiences down to a page?
What’s included: Our resume service offers you several successful templates to choose from and helps you get your academic and work life onto the page in a way that is compact, powerful, reader-friendly, and errorless. This service does not require online meetings. It will be conducted through a shared Google drive document that both you and your consultant will develop, revise, and perfect. This includes up to 2 hours of comments, editing, and proofreading.
Quantitative Resume or CV
$1500
This service will take whatever you have already prepared, if anything, and help you craft your first quantitative resume or CV. We will teach you the difference between a normal resume and this genre and help you showcase your coursework, research, professional experience, and activities in a manner that foregrounds your qualifications for graduate-level studies.
Writing Sample Preparation
(Evaluation required for price estimate)
This service takes your undergraduate or master’s writing sample and helps you craft it into a graduate-level essay that meets the departmental length requirements. This can entail strengthening your thesis to a more advanced level, reorganizing your material/evidence, recommending further research to pursue, showing you how to locate and discuss seminal peer- reviewed articles on the topic, explaining your methodological choices, up-leveling your theoretical considerations, tightening the writing, and final editing. If you’d like this service, please submit your writing sample “as is” for an evaluation and price.
Complete Application Review: $2000
If you have already produced all of your required documents and want a systematic and thorough review by experts in the field, you are welcome to submit all application documents to us (application, resume/CV, statement of purpose, additional essays)!
What’s included: We will review your documents holistically, as the graduate admissions committee will do. We will offer suggestions for revision and provide you with a written recommendation that evaluates your application as a whole and tells you how you can take it to the next level. This review will help you understand what admissions officers will see when they review your file, and this will help you understand the revisions you need to make before submitting.
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HOW THE PROCESS WORKS
Once we’ve agreed to work together:
1. You (the student) complete a few hours of pre-work and brainstorming exercises for your statements indicating your targeting programs. Once these are complete, you share them with us.
2. We meet as many times as needed, and I use 167 different tools to help you find your deepest story, the ideal structure, and details that will make it sing. This process can take days or weeks (depending on your timeline) and we won't rest until it's right.
10-School
Comprehensive Graduate School
Package
(NOTE: Not currently offered. Please inquire if interested in comprehensive help.)
$6,000
The Comprehensive Graduate School Package includes guidance on applications for up to 10 schools, including:
Discussions with student throughout the process
Educational and career goal discussion and guidance
Identification of a balanced list of schools with consideration given to institutional selectivity, educational and professional goals, student’s test scores and academic record, and financial parameters
Guidance and recommendations for topic selection, drafting, and revising required personal statements and supplemental writing
Advice on when to submit applications
Advice on standardized testing
Assistance in preparing a professional resume
Suggested strategies for organizing and managing the process
Advice on school visits and showing interest in each program
Advice/coaching on interview preparation
Advice on seeking recommendations when asked
Review of applications before submitting if requested
Discussions regarding financial and merit / institutional aid
Scholarship application support
Guidance and support until a final decision has been made
Fee Policy: Unless already under a signed/dated letter of agreement with College Essay Guy LLC, fees as presented above are subject to change without prior notice.
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Detailed BREAKDOWN OF Graduate SCHOOL COMPREHENSIVE CONSULTING PROCESS
Once we’ve agreed to work together:
You (the student) complete 2-3 hrs of pre-work that includes a college preferences questionnaire, a Myers-Briggs personality assessment, plus brainstorming exercises for personal statement, Resume and Additional Info section. Once these are complete, you share them with Kim, along with your transcript, test scores, and preliminary list of schools (if available).
Kim reviews what you’ve sent and emails you to schedule an initial 90-minute session.
In that initial session, Kim reviews your transcript to discuss any inconsistencies, reviews your resume to determine if you are presenting yourself in the best way possible, discusses your LSAT scores and needs (i.e. whether to retake or not, and when), recommendation letters (both academic and professional), strategy for the personal statement, and school preferences.
Kim then gets to work developing your preliminary college list based on the information you’ve shared. Two to three days later she shares the preliminary list in a 30-minute follow-up Skype session, and provides you all the resources you’ll need to continue developing the list. Once that’s done
You meet as many times as needed with Ethan to write the personal statement. During this time, Kim and Ethan meet weekly to discuss your progress. Once your personal statement is in good shape:
You meet with Kim to review all components to make any needed adjustments until you have total confidence before you click “submit.” Then you breathe a sigh of relief. Because it's done.
FAQ
Can I see what it’s like to work with Ethan?
Sure. Here’s a 45-min private YouTube video in which Ethan gives 45 tips on their entire college application process and this 1-hr video is a great introduction to his style and process.
Where do sessions take place?
Online via Skype, email and Google docs.
Do you write essays for students?
No. The essays submitted will be the original work of the student.
What if I (student) am not a good writer?
The process may take a bit longer. That’s okay with us.
What advice do you have as I begin the process?
We highly recommend developing a balanced college list. Most students, for example, fixate on 1 or 2 highly selective (usually Ivy-League) schools, but we find the students who are most happy with the process are those who helped develop a wide range (usually nine schools) with around 3 reach, 3 maybe, and 3 likely.
Do you help students develop college lists?
We do! We work with Kim Snyder Mehta, an extremely experienced college list specialist and graduate school expert and the fee for this service is included in the comprehensive package above.
Can I meet Ethan to make sure we'll get along?
Absolutely. I (Ethan) am available for 15-min get-to-know-you Skype calls with those serious about working together one-on-one. You can email me directly at: ethan@collegeessayguy.com
Scope of Services
A. College Essay Guy responsibilities include providing the services indicated in the selection option(s) above.
B. Parent and student responsibilities include:
Disclosing in a timely manner all student’s academic and psychological history, including report cards, official score reports from standardized tests, and reports of any disciplinary actions
Maintaining regular communication with College Essay Guy Team (henceforth “CEG”)
Meeting CEG deadlines for submission of essays and completion of assigned tasks
Scheduling of and making college visits (if applicable)
Maintaining communication with the student’s high school counselor and following the requirements of the student’s high school guidance office
Sending official test scores to colleges
Securing academic and personal recommendations
Completing and sending applications (or waitlist/appeal statements) in a timely manner
Monitoring status of application and advising colleges of enrollment intentions
Writing for the application must be the student’s own original work
C. Payments
For your convenience, a three-payment option is available, with 1/3 due at the start of the process, 1/3 due one month later, and 1/3 due one month after that. If less than two months left before deadline, full payment is due one week before the final application deadline.
PAYMENT MAY BE MADE VIA CHECK (preferred) made out to “College Essay Guy” and sent to:
College Essay Guy LLC
4036 Goodwin Avenue
Los Angeles, CA 90039
Payment also possible by direct bank transfer or PayPal, but client (you) will be responsible for fees.
D. Important Note
Since the services provided by CEG are advisory in nature and the final decision on selection of colleges rests with the student and family, it is understood that neither Ethan Sawyer nor any member of the CEG Team guarantees acceptance to any particular college. Fees are not accepted from institutions or programs for referral or placement of a client. The primary obligation of CEG is the welfare of the student.
Although we have had gratifying success, no guarantees are implied. Since the only person who can impact the college’s ultimate decision is the student, designated fees are payable whether or not the student gains acceptance to the college of choice.